DWW Music Prompt

A Heartbreak by Angus and Julia Stone

A Heartbreak by Angus and Julia Stone

Hey you, have you ever had your heart broken? Don’t answer that. It may surprise you but it is one cliche that sinks in deep to our very core. I’d like to narrate my own fair share in this venture called a heartbreak- i really want to- but i think it is best i adorn it with poetry and this beautiful song, a heartbreak, by Angus and Julia Stone.

This is DAILY WISDOM WORDS MUSIC WRITING EXERCISE, a special sunday edition with your host, ABUH MONDAY ENEOJO. Participating is easy and quick. All you have to do is;

  • Listen to the song
  • Compose a poem inspired by song
  • Share with us.

Remember, it does not count if you do not invite someone to the writing exercise. Let’s do this! ✍🎶

Shirley Satterfield
Shirley Mandel Satterfield is a Baltimore girl from way back who was raised in the rough and tumble world of a steelworkers family and writes Christian poetry, memoirs and nonfiction. She has lived to survive a life fraught with domestic violence, child abuse, and mental illness and writes to help others to survive the same kinds of things. After becoming a radiology technician, she went on to serve in the U.S. Army and later on in life attended Averett University in Danville, Virginia as a nontraditional student earning two B.A. degrees in English and journalism and was awarded the Ember Award for Excellence in Poetry by the campus literary magazine. She was also named correspondent of the Day by the Richmond Times Dispatch for a letter she wrote to the editor concerning the importance of compassionate treatment and the acceptance of the mentally ill by society.
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3 months ago

Sounds of love
stop simmering
when i see your
love breaking mine.

What we once had,
the bad breathe you
ignored when we kissed
now is a stench to my soul.

Maybe i will dare
love maybe i will not.
Its unbearable sting
tinkles me mad.

Last edited 3 months ago by Abuh Monday Eneojo
3 months ago

Love the first stanza! Great write, Monday!

3 months ago

Thanks Rob…you finally made me love Angus and Julia Stone…Will get their albums soon. How are you doing today? Will you post a write? No need typing as email its safe here.

3 months ago

Posted… Yes, I write everything to A&JS now. Adore their music.

3 months ago

I know you cannot resist it Rob

3 months ago

What is a heartbreak
an expectation let down
a promise with no weight-Ad (CRG)

3 months ago
Reply to  CurvyRedGurl

still trying to understand it…

3 months ago

Bare Trees

Girl you septembered me
eyes dancing on mine
I met your friends
they told me everything.

Summer’s glaze falling
around us like bare trees
you’re a heartbreak empath
transparent in my mind.

Winter’s rain took you
crying for my help
we all wear a new story now
what else can we say?

Last edited 3 months ago by @Tetrametracall1
3 months ago


3 months ago

Barefoot i walk into the sunrise
life blends in the glare
bleeding into words
i can almost taste
i have turned into
an old edtion
of savage romanticism
drifting in moist ocean air
penetrating mysteries
heart breaking
my mind is going places
yet I’m neither here nor there

3 months ago
Reply to  Michelle

Barefoot i walk into the sunrise…you mesmerised with your words.🥰🤗

3 months ago

Who understands love
The fear of the unknown
Frightened and living alone
Female friends I thought loved
Never called one my proper girlfriend
Came close each time
But I end up with my heart broken
#dailywisdomwords #dwwmp


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