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I’d love to feature this amazing picture that was sent to me by a dear friend of mine who lives in a beautiful Island called Seychelles.
-See picture
-Compose a poem inspired by picture
-Share with us via box below
Thru verdant fields
We wander
Along golden sands
We saunter
The sun warming us
With his rays
Guiding us thru
Lazy summer days
The moon lighting
Balmy twilight nights
Splashing thru foamy surf
kissing at midnight
Island living
Island loving
Love the diction Kattt… It is sublime
That’s very kind. Thank you 😀
Take the path
thru rows of trees
Follow the scent
of fragrant breeze
All you seek will come true
Open your mind
when walking through
Spoke in a whisper
almost hard to hear
Said to be brave
and face my fears
Take a leap
don’t be ‘fraid
Step into the sun
keep from the shade
Thanks for posting this here. It is a wonderful write.
Rich lush atmospheres
blanket our souls here
Seychelles’ beauty
holds our breath.
Such days we long for you
singing your eyes on us
words we love on our lips
sharing your smile here.
Becoming into such light
we savor your real today
gentle footsteps find ours
rushing for yours.
Bravooooooooooo!
Oh Seychelles
How I miss
Your amazing
Green mountains
And white
Sandy beaches
The stories they
Could tell
Of me and my
Lover walking
Late night on
Your shores
Swimmingly in
Your glorious
Blue ocean
We’ll be back soon
To leave more
Memories
And just enjoy
Your sublime beauty
You’ve truly painted the island with your amazing and beautiful words…Nice write
You are always so generous! Thank you my friend! ☮️💟
Paradise dance in
tender sentiments to
evergreen mountains
sun kissed beaches
summertime of wishes
Seychelles my island
a saga of wonderment
sunrise beautify the sky
with Coco de mer dreams
born of foklore fusion
here i rest my thoughts
treasuring waterfalls .
Here i rest my thoughts…that’s one lovely line that stays in the mind of a poet like me. Anyways, i just want to point you to somethings in the poem. Before i tell you, i just want you to know that i might be wrong in my judgement, but i will still relay the message.
The poem is lovely. i Love the use of initial repetition and i saw some typos too. i guess you were in a hurry to paint your ideas before they…Nice write my friend.
Ahh typos 😔..I hate that
it is a normal phenomenon…no one is above mistakes
mee2 too0 ;-))))))
hahahahahah…I think i’m well aware of the fact that you indulge in typos often…
;-PPP
:-)))